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ChrissiexBelle's avatar

Not afraid to say I had to Google the definition of a couple words 😂 brilliant poem for the season! Big fan of the cadence of this piece, awesome job guys

Kris Johnston's avatar

Obviously I'm late seeing this, but wow! "Pools of sinspill" is my new favorite phrase. Bloody brilliant 👏✨🖤

Stefan Baciu's avatar

This is definitely going to get referenced in my novels.

Ellis Wiens's avatar

Long live the Eternivore! (if it can be called living at all)

Kerr Martin's avatar

Feel free my friend. I would love to expand on the lore myself sometime. Perhaps even in a follow up collab with @Ellis Wiens if he’s interested in doing the same. Long live the Eternivore, indeed. The inhale and the exhale. He consumes it all.

Colin Cuming’s Eternal Spiral's avatar

Very nice! 🤘

Kerr Martin's avatar

Thank you very much Colin! Funnily enough I was just gearing up to read your story so seeing your name pop up was like destiny. I’m glad you enjoyed the encounter with the Eternivore!

Colin Cuming’s Eternal Spiral's avatar

Eternivore is cool! Ya’ll could do anything with it. Yeah, excellent cadence.

Kerr Martin's avatar

I appreciate that man. I don't know if Ellis is interested but I'd definitely be open to exploring more of the lore and concept of the Eternivore. I think it could be something long running for sure.

Colin Cuming’s Eternal Spiral's avatar

💯

Gustave Deresse's avatar

"Merciless mercy, feverfleshed misery.

The Eternivore feasts in lunatic dreams—"

Amazing!!! On to part two... perhaps link it from this one as well? 😋

Kerr Martin's avatar

I thought I had linked them through…duh. I will definitely fix that ASAP. I'm glad you're loving the pieces though, we don't deserve you! 👊

Gustave Deresse's avatar

Absolutely!! But nah, man. 😂 These are amazing. I’m just glad I got into them. Kind of afraid of having my own efforts put side by side here. It’ll be fun though.

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I’m preparing mentally for it.