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Brother Rob's avatar

I like the way you string in other posts, I’ve had similar ideas but wasn’t so confident in the execution. Well played!

Kerr Martin's avatar

Thank you dude, I actually pulled back a little from the original idea of having more strung in pieces, I felt like it might be overwhelming and decided to stay reserved with it. I really appreciate the compliment though. I was worried about that haha.

MoTy's avatar

I can feel blood and sweat in this piece. Numerous marvellous lines but this one made me smile “Killers killing killing killers”. Like an ice-cream post hefty meal x

Kerr Martin's avatar

Haha that’s a brilliant way to put it. I mean, I’m all for the good guy with the gun, but heroes also have blood on their hands. Repentance is for the savior, not just the sinner, in this earthly realm.

Thank you so much.

Ramona Moth's avatar

mythic ! hymn! like a prophecy . immersive .

Kerr Martin's avatar

Appreciate it, homeslice. Mythic and hymn were exactly what I was aiming for. Something more prophetic than poetic. The kind of thing that crawls into the brain.

Athena's avatar

I loved this Kerr

Kerr Martin's avatar

Thank you so much, Athena!

Keep your head up lass. I know you’re sailing through rough waters right now, you’ve got this.

Metaphysical Builder's avatar

That was remarkable, brilliant.

Kerr Martin's avatar

Coming from you, that means a lot. I think your work is some of the most artistically brilliant on the platform so this really is a high compliment. Much appreciated, my friend.

ChrissiexBelle's avatar

Hallelujah

Kerr Martin's avatar

WASH AWAY THE SIN-AH!